Ok so I'm not too happy with my story for many reasons.
one happens to be one chapter idea I had is a bit too similar to an episode of Thundercats I saw recetnly. In the show they also have a blue tech stone that is being used as a battery for the city which was what I was planning on doing in my story.
Another reason is I think I'm focusing too much on making its own fantasy world with its own tools and such and hardly focusing on the story and characters.
The characters are also another reason why I'm changing things up. They're a bit flat.
I also feel like I'm going over board trying to be as creative as possible on every little detail with out looking at the big picture first. My dad actually pointed this out to me when i showed him the storyboard animation I had originally planned to do for class. I have to say he's right. I need to ease back a bit and make sure I state the message of the story first.
So I'm focusing on making sure I know what the message and theme of the story would be, pulling back a bit on the fantasy. I need to keep in mind that it doesn't have to be super elaborate to be a good story.
Now while I'm working on M.O.P.E.D. Still, I started getting new ideas to save for later. I really wish I knew how to multitask so I could make all the ideas but that may cause me to burn out. I gotta ease my way in to things. If i rush on ideas, it'll be a very horrible creation.
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